September 02, 2008

Why Periods are More Effective than Exclamation Points

(An exercise in short sentences)

I got hurt.

Just rain.

She’s not here.

But you didn't.

Try one.

Stay still.

Not enough.

Good hat.

I would have.

Say it.

Come back.

Exactly.

1 comment:

Mamaclsn said...

I love this post. Very well illustrated.